Thursday, September 21, 2017

drowning


She hides
herself
Giving only
what is asked

She shouts
out loud
Wanting
someone to hear

She sighs
wishing
For your hand
in hers

With her last
breath
She hurts
no more

9 comments:

  1. Lovely poem that demonstrates many that suffers from depression. Hope that there is more love in the community...

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  2. Thanks so much for sharing such a powering and meaningful words.

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  3. Such a deep poem with such deep meaning. Well written, powerful said. Well done. I love this btw "Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken." Just love it :)

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  4. This is such a well-written and meaningful poem. Love it!

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  5. What a lovely poem!! it has a deep meaning!! Thank you for sharing with us :-)

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  6. Great poem -- thanks for sharing!

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  7. A beautiful poem that is full of so much pain.

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  8. Such a beautiful poem. Well-written. Your poem has deep meaning.

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