Thursday, September 21, 2017

drowning


She hides
herself
Giving only
what is asked

She shouts
out loud
Wanting
someone to hear

She sighs
wishing
For your hand
in hers

With her last
breath
She hurts
no more
at

9 comments:

  1. Jessie KooSeptember 23, 2017 at 10:12 AM

    Lovely poem that demonstrates many that suffers from depression. Hope that there is more love in the community...

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  2. EllieSeptember 23, 2017 at 4:31 PM

    Thanks so much for sharing such a powering and meaningful words.

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  3. tina hogan grantSeptember 24, 2017 at 12:29 AM

    Such a deep poem with such deep meaning. Well written, powerful said. Well done. I love this btw "Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken." Just love it :)

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  4. Jiawun - Beauty Nerd By NightSeptember 25, 2017 at 12:45 AM

    This is such a well-written and meaningful poem. Love it!

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  5. Hra karidiSeptember 25, 2017 at 1:28 AM

    What a lovely poem!! it has a deep meaning!! Thank you for sharing with us :-)

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  6. UnknownSeptember 25, 2017 at 5:36 AM

    Great poem -- thanks for sharing!

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  7. HeatherSeptember 25, 2017 at 12:51 PM

    A beautiful poem that is full of so much pain.

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  8. Blair VillanuevaSeptember 25, 2017 at 7:08 PM

    Lovely.
    Do you also write Haiku?

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  9. UnknownOctober 20, 2017 at 10:31 AM

    Such a beautiful poem. Well-written. Your poem has deep meaning.

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